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Avere_acf
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Avere_acf
Post Number: 529
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 203.195.203.203
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Wednesday, June 16, 2004 - 11:16 pm: |    |
mamalu thanks.narration koncham weak,excuse me.
and iliyas and his wife gives the complaint that their daughter has kidnaped and they suspect that
RRR and sandesh.
and they tell the polise that sandesh is RRR
sishya{chela}.
RRR and sandesh have planed and kidnaped their daughter.
memu vaadiki dabbulu iyala andhuke plan sesi naa daughter ni kidnap sesaaru ani vallidara paina complaint isthaaru Iliyas and rathna.
RRR paina complent ichi vadini bokka lo thosi vesthe,dabbu eggoteyachu ani iliyas gaadi idea.
kaani police inspector,ramachandra is a friend of RRR and he will not belive this complaint.
and he atarts a investigation.
and he too tells RRR that they have lodged a complaint on u.
sandesh will call and go rashmi to their aunty house and that is a village,abt 100 kilometrs from the city.
and RRR with his gang also starts searching
sandesh and rashmi.
and iliyas will call and go rekha in a car to search rashmi.
and he will stop the car in a lonly place and he will tell the truth to rekha {that he supported rashmi to kick off from the house,and he supported her with this intention}
and he also tell that he is going to kill u.
when rekha tries to escape he will shoot,her.
and she dies.
to be continued later,if u all like.
SURARARASU ante CHIRU |
Vsnivas
Bewarse
Username: Vsnivas
Post Number: 970
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 209.104.141.158
Rating: N/A
Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Wednesday, June 16, 2004 - 11:44 am: | |
*ing Batch Ikkada Entry Ichinda |
Nenu
Pilla Bewarse
Username: Nenu
Post Number: 1
Registered: 06-2004
Posted From: 217.58.160.194
Rating: N/A
Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Wednesday, June 16, 2004 - 11:40 am: | |
tharvatha???
Yevaru Nenu??  |
Sollu
Censor Bewarse
Username: Sollu
Post Number: 1396
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 67.170.139.13
Rating: N/A
Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Wednesday, June 16, 2004 - 11:08 am: | |
avere babai nice twist.....
ee story ki copy rights undayi...evadanna cinemalo pedithe pack avuddi |
Godfather
Bewarse ke Bewarse!
Username: Godfather
Post Number: 3541
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 62.90.177.204
Rating: N/A
Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Wednesday, June 16, 2004 - 10:56 am: | |
ledu mama story baga vundhi!! nuvu continue cheyi
MD : DEVDAS CLUB    |
Godfather
Bewarse ke Bewarse!
Username: Godfather
Post Number: 3540
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 62.90.177.204
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Wednesday, June 16, 2004 - 10:55 am: | |
// story ni artham sesukondi please
MD : DEVDAS CLUB |
Godfather
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Username: Godfather
Post Number: 3539
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 62.90.177.204
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Wednesday, June 16, 2004 - 10:54 am: | |
// story ni artham sesukondi please
MD : DEVDAS CLUB |
Avere_acf
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Avere_acf
Post Number: 527
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 203.195.203.203
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Wednesday, June 16, 2004 - 10:31 am: | |
yaa iam back.
mamalu narration koncham weak mamalu please excuse me,and story ni artham sesukondi please.
narration koncham weak.
and iliyas{rashmi second father}supports her love with that cunning intention in his mind.
one day for some simple reason vallidaru potaldu kuntaru{kushi cinama lo laaga}but no that situation.
and for her mother rathna,this becomes a plus point,koncham bedristhundhi,vaadini vadileyi,that guy is bad ani somthing somthing sepputhundhi,and rashmi realy gets confused and she will attempt suicide.
but she will not be succesfull.
and iliyas with his cunning mind,he will send sandesh and rashmi them far.
and he will tell the polise that sandesh has kidnapped her daughter.
will be continued later if u like.
SURARARASU ante CHIRU |
Avere_acf
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Avere_acf
Post Number: 526
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 203.195.203.203
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Wednesday, June 16, 2004 - 10:11 am: | |
thanks mamalu,i will continue now.
actualy iliyas is very cunning person.
vaadu actualy second father of the girls.
and he want full property in his name,becaz
vaadiki koncham chaana appu{credit untundhi}
RRR deggira.
and his plan is to kill the children.
and offcourse,he will agree to their love,endhukante,vallaki pelli sesi pampisthe,
vallaki property share,eggoteyachu ani vaadi plan.
brb.
SURARARASU ante CHIRU |
Billa_pichodu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Billa_pichodu
Post Number: 197
Registered: 04-2004
Posted From: 195.47.45.58
Rating: N/A
Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, June 14, 2004 - 11:58 pm: | |
naaku ippudu antaga nachinattu anipinchatlaa entoo
kikiki
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Sollu
Censor Bewarse
Username: Sollu
Post Number: 1348
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 128.193.0.6
Rating: N/A
Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, June 14, 2004 - 11:56 pm: | |
kada BP mava...naaku kuda nachindi |
Billa_pichodu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Billa_pichodu
Post Number: 194
Registered: 04-2004
Posted From: 195.47.45.58
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, June 14, 2004 - 11:43 pm: | |
i like it |
Sollu
Censor Bewarse
Username: Sollu
Post Number: 1347
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 128.193.4.98
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, June 14, 2004 - 11:19 pm: | |
sanka_ssn @ yahoo co in |
Avere_acf
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Avere_acf
Post Number: 524
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 203.195.203.203
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, June 14, 2004 - 11:13 pm: | |
nee email id ivvu.
SURARARASU ante CHIRU |
Avere_acf
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Avere_acf
Post Number: 523
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 203.195.203.203
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, June 14, 2004 - 11:12 pm: | |
ikkada odhaa
SURARARASU ante CHIRU |
Sollu
Censor Bewarse
Username: Sollu
Post Number: 1346
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 128.193.0.6
Rating: N/A
Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, June 14, 2004 - 11:09 pm: | |
mama adedo raasi naaku pampu main page lo padestha
kotha writers and ideas ni encouraging scheme  |
Avere_acf
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Avere_acf
Post Number: 522
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 203.195.203.203
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, June 14, 2004 - 11:07 pm: | |
yaa sorry maava.small mistake.
SURARARASU ante CHIRU |
Sollu
Censor Bewarse
Username: Sollu
Post Number: 1344
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 128.193.0.6
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, June 14, 2004 - 11:00 pm: | |
story bane undi kani writer thana characters perulu ala marchipothe ela babai......kastha gurtettukoni raayi story
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Avere_acf
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Avere_acf
Post Number: 519
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 203.195.203.203
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, June 14, 2004 - 10:52 pm: | |
thestory goes like this.
the characters in this story are.
names.
hero:sandesh{age 20}
heroine:rashmi{age 17}
heroine sister:reka{sofware enginear}
heroine mother:rathnamma.
heroine father:iliyas.
{second father}
police inspector:ramachandra.
rowdy: ring road rajni.
sandesh aunty:komalamaa.{widow}
the story is.narration koncham weak.
rathna husband dies and married to an muslim named iliyas.
rashmi is a intelligent girl,who reads well and very active.
satish is little weak in studies but good in games and active too.
some how sandesh impresses rashimi and they both fall in love.
sandesh and rashmi both are lovers,they both look good couple in my story.
but rashmi mother dosent like these kind of acts,as she is still yuoung.
and rathna want rashmi to become like her sister.
to be continued later.if u all like too.
SURARARASU ante CHIRU |
