Kingchoudary
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Post Number: 102058 Registered: 03-2004 Posted From: 98.158.252.55
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | Posted on Monday, September 09, 2019 - 4:00 am: |
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https://www.eenadu.net/sundaymagazine/inner_page/13050 1970s-80s lo yekkuva gaa raase vaallu yee type story.... First Para, gajibiji gaa rasadu, yevaru matladuthunnaro artham kaledhu, punctuation sarigga lekapovadam valla inka yekkuva gandaragolam ayyindhi.... Second para starting line kooda sunanda yevaru annadhi few seconds artham kaledhu.... Ika pothey, oka pedha ammayini chadivinchadam, paiki thevadam ok ok.... kaani too much dramatic gaa rasadu.... Jyothamma antha pedha asramam kattindhi kaani, thana friend Sunanda ni yendhuku kalusukovalani try cheyyaledhu? Writer Telugu skills improve chesukovali.... Konchem attract chesinavi yemante, aa Jyothi ni intiki rammani patha battalu ivvadam, Tolstoy book ni ichi encourage cheyyadam lantivi.... Overall gaa naa rating below average 1.5/5.... |