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Blazewada
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Post Number: 19872
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Posted on Wednesday, November 27, 2013 - 1:40 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Kichidi:




MOVIEART--thottigang
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Kichidi
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Post Number: 29690
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Posted on Wednesday, November 27, 2013 - 12:23 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Bewarsegadu:

Rajamouli level lo slow build up kaakundaa edho puri style fast gaa cheyochu kada

I would have started the movie with a heated discussion in a typical IT Conference room.. Every one is tryng to play the blame game and finally it boils down to the protagonist.. He comes back from the room worried..

Scene shifts to home where he could not sleep well and starts getting fears like getting fired etc..

Next day comes to office and then roll the movie as Manasi shown..


em septiri em septhiri MOVIEART--ali.kummavga
ITALIAN MAFIASOCLIPART--smoke
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Kubang
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 2:05 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Bewarsegadu:

protagonist..




nuvvu first aa jeevi gaadi reviews chadavatam maaneyyi
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Bewarsegadu
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Post Number: 676
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 2:00 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

All said and done its very easy to comment on somebody's work than making it

So manasi baa.. Good job..
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Bewarsegadu
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 1:53 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Kubangesh,
Rajamouli level lo slow build up kaakundaa edho puri style fast gaa cheyochu kada

I would have started the movie with a heated discussion in a typical IT Conference room.. Every one is tryng to play the blame game and finally it boils down to the protagonist.. He comes back from the room worried..

Scene shifts to home where he could not sleep well and starts getting fears like getting fired etc..

Next day comes to office and then roll the movie as Manasi shown..

Righteousness ki I am the Boss ki linking kooda anthagaa match avvaledhu
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Musicfan
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 1:39 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Telugustudio:

Video not available




mee desam lo ante anukunta, Leka DB janala nasa tattukoleka peekesi untadu Ittam mama.
Bhai - Audio Review
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Vusirikai
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 1:31 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

naaku ardham auyye ardham kanattu undheee.... MOVIEART--bemmi2
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Telugustudio
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 1:25 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Video not available :-(
www.watchtelugu.com
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Kubang
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 1:16 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Bewarsegadu:

There is no enough background info for the audience to empathize with the main protagonist..




8 mins lo neeku background front ground anni choopisthaduMOVIEART--bemmi.sarle
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Bewarsegadu
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 12:23 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Manasio
Very good attempt..
However I am the BOSS ane daaniki righteous kanna EGO more apt gaa untundhi..

Also you should have dealt the story in a realistic way rather than going for a karan johar kind of ending..

Nenu Design cheyyalenu I need a break ante PINK slip chethilo peduthaaru in reality.

There is no enough background info for the audience to empathize with the main protagonist..

Copying and Pasting lekundaa coding cheyyadam ante etttaaa kudurutundhi raaaja???
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Naaistam
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 4:11 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Filmlover:

SUN annai....



ante enti baa :P
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Filmlover
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 3:58 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Fakester:


MOVIEART--bemmi.gm
You might love angels.But you have to live with people.
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Naaistam
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 3:57 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Esperanza:

ee taapa nuvve hero ga digeseyi....


MOVIEART--bemmi.shock
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Naaistam
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 3:56 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Godfather:

Office related issue meeda aithe naavo rendu vuchita salahalu.. Not being commited at work is as good as stealing anee topic.. Janalu instaead of gaining knowledge and getting better at what they are doing ane dhani meeda focus cheyaka povatam anne pointuu meeda inkoti..




idedo direct mana btdb sodarulani anattu unde MOVIEART--bemmi.uhoh
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Fakester
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Filmlover:

Already post mortem aipoindi kabatti.i wish u all the best for future projects SUN annai....



MOVIEART--odarpu
Tarak....Mokshu....Kohli
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Filmlover
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 2:29 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Naaistam:



Already post mortem aipoindi kabatti.i wish u all the best for future projects SUN annai....
You might love angels.But you have to live with people.
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Esperanza
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 2:09 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Naaistam:




Appaji final ga oka point maristi.....ee taapa nuvve hero ga digeseyi.....infact ee role nuvvu chesi unte ina baga pandinchevadivemo
space for lease
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Godfather
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 1:57 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

-ves ante kothaga chepataniki emi ledu..

Very good effort maanasu for first short film. Inko rendu moodu thiyyi, you will get better.

Office related issue meeda aithe naavo rendu vuchita salahalu.. Not being commited at work is as good as stealing anee topic.. Janalu instaead of gaining knowledge and getting better at what they are doing ane dhani meeda focus cheyaka povatam anne pointuu meeda inkoti..
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Naaistam
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Btdb:




btdb baa CLIPART--kiss
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Blazewada
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420:




manager for you, dont walk carefree when you are carrying gold bag in your arm. else our boys will get in to action use their hand art. MOVIEART--bm.lol
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Naaistam
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Sasibabu:


boob baaMOVIEART--sunil2
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Naaistam
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Kubang:

Instead of 8 mins+ try it with in 6mins. Is there a reason for 8 mins?




office lo vere athanu kooda idhe suggest chesadu...crispy ga cheyyi...8mins enduku ani...but ey scenes cut cheyyalo ardamkaaledu...

for me story ante...mundu establish cheyyali...conflict chupinchali and then twist chupinchali...final ga happy ending cheyyali...so ekkadayuna cut cheyyali ante manasoppatam ledu
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Naaistam
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Musicfan:

co-worker emo anukunna




co-worker ey annai
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Naaistam
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Shadow:

Nuvvu eti chepdam anukunnav..nene boss eti?




baa MOVIEART--sunil.hurt

there is some psychology associated...when someone want to steal...they will have a fear of getting caught...to overcome that one shld feel they are the one's who is on the top and nobody is watching them...

hence I am the boss...
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420
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Blazewada:

At least 24 kg of gold worth Rs 7.7 crore was seized from the Netaji Subhash Chandra Bose International Airport in Kolkata on Tuesday.





Investigating officer 420 reporting to duty , SIR !

MOVIEART--allu.entry
Knit India,do not split India !
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Blazewada
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420:

just 6 gold coins being concealed as 2 Euro coins...




now i got it.

Express News Service : kolkata, Tue Nov 19 2013, 14:20 hrs At least 24 kg of gold worth Rs 7.7 crore was seized from the Netaji Subhash Chandra Bose International Airport in Kolkata on Tuesday. As many as 24 gold bars weighing a kilogram each, lying unclaimed in two bags in an empty aircraft, were recovered by the airport officials while checking the aircraft.

The airport authorities immediately informed the customs authorities. Following this, a team of custom officials later seized two bags.

Though nobody has been arrested yet, the customs officers have started probe into the seizure. According to sources, this is one of the biggest gold seizures from the airport in the eastern region.
MOVIEART--bm.expr1
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420
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Posted on Tuesday, November 26, 2013 - 12:05 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Kubang:

how is your gold donga ravaana going





just 6 gold coins being concealed as 2 Euro coins...
Knit India,do not split India !
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Kubang
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Posted on Monday, November 25, 2013 - 11:57 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


420:


MOVIEART--harathi how is your gold donga ravaana going
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420
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Very good attempt and also thought provoking ..

MOVIEART--bwalk
Knit India,do not split India !
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Kubang
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Posted on Monday, November 25, 2013 - 11:21 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Sasibabu:


thelise adigav kaduMOVIEART--bemmi.allu
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Shadow
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Posted on Monday, November 25, 2013 - 7:42 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Sasibabu:




Manasarjuna MOVIEART--bm.lol
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Sasibabu
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Naaistam:

1. stress lo unnadu kurrodu
2. he removes all the stickies shows frustration hez going thru
3. he will be reading dirty tricks book where he finds motivation to malpractice
4. he gets motivated to lift design from an other organization violating copyrights
5. and then stickies appear from nowhere showing the various impacts of stealing design..
6. initially he thinks that his manager is playing a prank but later finds out that
7. hez dreaming and the stickies are his own introspections..
8. Once he realizes that its wrong then he drops the idea by dumping the I'm the boss sticky...
9. At that point his manager motivates/helps him to complete the assigned project proposal..
10. on her way back to her cabin, she looks at the sticky and finds out that she also went thru such a phase..
11. when she opens the dairy, the line is strike off which ideally should mean that she went thru that phase once but chose to keep her integrity intact...anduke aa line strike off lo chupinchanu...
12. so the theme is if an org wants to have integrity at whatever they do then it should percolate down to the lowest levels from the highest levels in the hierarchy...at every level to be precise


iyanni baane vunnayi gaanee last lo nagarjuna ki malle oka konda mangal step try sesi adhi kudharaka sathikila padina kurrodu evaru baaMOVIEART--bemmi.peep
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Shadow
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Posted on Monday, November 25, 2013 - 7:38 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Miya mi oppice lo porilu lera? Nuvvu eti chepdam anukunnav..nene boss eti? Mi nagulu bomma boss movie nunchy inspire iyava? Nuvvu dir aapi action lo digey...hero madiri unnav
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Tirugubothu
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Posted on Monday, November 25, 2013 - 7:28 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Prasanth:


MOVIEART--gulabi.sharabi
Naakavu ley aaku
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Btdb
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Posted on Monday, November 25, 2013 - 6:29 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Baavundi. Nenu chusi, naa HD ki chipinchaa emi artham ayyindo cheppamani. "I am boss" stickies konchem confuse chesinaa, nuvvu cheppalanukonna concept cheppesindi. So first attempt lone cheppalanukonnadi baagaa teesaav, good job.

Changes ante, already andaru cheppinatlu starting voice over, subtitles konchem slow undaali. Other than these,it is GOOD.
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Kubang
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Prasanth:


MOVIEART--vja.hug long time no see
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Prasanth
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Posted on Monday, November 25, 2013 - 2:27 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

good job team...alok expressed well..
u might have missed the days of india-pakistan partition...dont worry...its already started in telugu naaDu..
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Kubang:

not all of us are quick readers




Ippudu maanas vachi manalanti uncles kosam teeyaledu antaademo CLIPART--lol2
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Kubang:

voice over strong ga vundali ante ippudu moham babu no mahesh babu no ekkada nundi thesthadu.




strong ante aayana cheppindi kaneesam neerasam lekunda vinapadali kadaa ani Kubangesh,

Mottam video lo weak link aa voice over. Aa ammayi boss laaga anipinchaledu, co-worker emo anukunna, till the last scene where she found her own "Im Boss" page from her dairy.

Very true, first video ayina didnt appear like that. Movies choosina experience, DB experience baaga upayoga padindemo..
Bhai - Audio Review
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Kubang
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Esperanza:


voice over strong ga vundali ante ippudu moham babu no mahesh babu no ekkada nundi thesthadu. MOVIEART--bemmi.lungi2


Yes, captions are too quick and no time to read. Aa lady character konchem balamga vunna aunty ni pedithe bagundi.
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Kubang
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Posted on Monday, November 25, 2013 - 12:22 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Maanas Naidu,

MOVIEART--bemmi.whistleMOVIEART--harathiMOVIEART--sunil.cry

Entha edigi poya vayya...

Two suggestions - captions need to be there little longer for people to read completely, not all of us are quick readers

Instead of 8 mins+ try it with in 6mins. Is there a reason for 8 mins?
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Kichidi
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Posted on Monday, November 25, 2013 - 11:14 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

MOVIEART--jdepp
ITALIAN MAFIASOCLIPART--smoke
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Naaistam
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357 votes vachiniyyi company lo...maa bongulo company ki ardamkaaledu...meekaithe ardamayiddi anukunna, naa karmai MOVIEART--bemmi.angry1

mana reviews sudandi konni...

great composed , camera was fantastic ; full of sense in short duration..well directed too:-) ..cheers
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Rocking performance. The video should be used for training purposes.
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I liked the expressions of "Hero - The Boss".... He is the real "Boss" in that. Awesome ....
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Too Good.Very relevant in our conetxt. protrayed so well. In one word- Loved it. The quality is so good, can be used in training workshops
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some serious talent being showcased here... great team work.
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Nice Movie! Good Thought, great editing. Excellent Performance!
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Great work !! Very innovative thought. Good Camera work too. Loved it. ;
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Good Work....Technically best among all :-)

@Alok #RealActor

@maanas #Respect

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Too good guys! Seriously why don't you try making a commericial 3 hour movie ?!?
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best video i have till now ..very good direction and camera movement ..everythin g was perfct ...gr8 work guys ...
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Too Good.. Great direction, camera work, perfomances and the overall concept...
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May be marketting was the factor behind its low vote count....till now of all watched movie...this was the best :-)
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Awesome guys....
Best actor award goeas to "Alok",,,
Sure this team will get some award :-)
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Nice concept, neat screenplay.. all the best ;-)

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It was a great watch, nice story, acting direction and editing :-)
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Really enjoyed watching the movie. You guys deserve to be at the top! Techn ically sound indeed! Steady camera work, perfect lighting and good music. If the re is ever a 2nd Film Festival, would really love to work with you guys! Hats Off!
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best movie.... superb acting and direction.. (Y)
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I hv seen 7-8 films in this competition till now!! This is the best one of the lot!! for me a Finalist!!
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I am the boss :-) nice concept
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Nice Concept... Far better than rest ...
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Nice movie. Good acting by alok and Iniyaal. I must say good ending of the movie !!!
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Alok ji lookes like Sampoornesh Babu!! :D
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Good Acting and direction also.
@Alok: Phata Poster Nik la Hero.
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Kudos to the creativity and effort of the team
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CLIPART--roflmaodeenemma nijama MOVIEART--ms.control
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Naaistam:

now entha varuku ardamayindi baa


point 4 varaku.. MOVIEART--sunil2
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Kichidi:



ee points ardamayiniyya baa
1. stress lo unnadu kurrodu
2. he removes all the stickies shows frustration hez going thru
3. he will be reading dirty tricks book where he finds motivation to malpractice
4. he gets motivated to lift design from an other organization violating copyrights
5. and then stickies appear from nowhere showing the various impacts of stealing design..
6. initially he thinks that his manager is playing a prank but later finds out that
7. hez dreaming and the stickies are his own introspections..
8. Once he realizes that its wrong then he drops the idea by dumping the I'm the boss sticky...
9. At that point his manager motivates/helps him to complete the assigned project proposal..
10. on her way back to her cabin, she looks at the sticky and finds out that she also went thru such a phase..
11. when she opens the dairy, the line is strike off which ideally should mean that she went thru that phase once but chose to keep her integrity intact...anduke aa line strike off lo chupinchanu...
12. so the theme is if an org wants to have integrity at whatever they do then it should percolate down to the lowest levels from the highest levels in the hierarchy...at every level to be precise

madyalo manager chesthunnadi anukuntaadu, ala anukotam kooda dream ne...

now entha varuku ardamayindi baa MOVIEART--gutaka
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Kichidi:

naaku nuvvu emi chepdam anukunnavo ardam kaledu miyya


grammar mistakes vunte manninchu. asala ardame ledante kshaminchu antademo ipudu miyya vochi.MOVIEART--masa
Signature... inka edi decide kaaledu CLIPART--smoke
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naaku nuvvu emi chepdam anukunnavo ardam kaledu miyya MOVIEART--bemmi.abba
ITALIAN MAFIASOCLIPART--smoke
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Naaistam:




Actress arachakam asaluMOVIEART--bemmi.shock
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Musicfan:

finally it was like ended on a different note, where the lady tore the "Im Boss" paper she wrote I guess, so the connectivity kind of didnt exist ani anipinchindi, May be I am wrong




Im the Boss but aa line strike off ayyuntaadi....and koddiga clear ga chuste aa dairy nov'09 lodhi...aame past lo jarigina isyam
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Esperanza:

ok, atleast kinda aa text vastunnattu asalu telavadam ledu...do something about it....also the voice over should be really audible....the first impression is the best impression ...so starting lo unna minor drawbacks coverup cheyi rest fine i think




sure baa...youtube version lo anni set chesta...neevu mundu cheppina points kooda set chesta okkati tappithe actress ni marchadam avvadu kiki
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Gaali:

I can guess that but I don't know if it really means that or gels well with that your intention.




attitude annai...bayastudu evadu tappu cheyadu...over confident gaade tappu gurinchi alochistaadu..
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Thanks to my Brother was touching..
Bhai - Audio Review
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Esper mama, you are right first few times I didnt know there was text I need to read, then the text was too long that by the time I read half of it the scene is changed.

Naaittam mama, anni points cheppesaru inka emi migalaledu, very good effort for first attempt. Text should be small and crisp so that viewers can focus on video as well.

then starting you gave some statistics about stress, not sure whether it is required? Just main character stress lo unnadu anadaniki ee line use chesara? But the message of video is about integrity, then the guy was struggling to complete the proposal, finally it was like ended on a different note, where the lady tore the "Im Boss" paper she wrote I guess, so the connectivity kind of didnt exist ani anipinchindi, May be I am wrong.

Lighter note, Aa BGM marchu mama, it didnt suit
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Naaistam:




ok, atleast kinda aa text vastunnattu asalu telavadam ledu...do something about it....also the voice over should be really audible....the first impression is the best impression ...so starting lo unna minor drawbacks coverup cheyi rest fine i think
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Naaistam:

.that point aadi attitude is "I am the boss"




I can guess that but I don't know if it really means that or gels well with that your intention. MOVIEART--bemmi.adi

Anduke endukaina manchidi nani clarification kosam ninnu adigaanu.
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Gaali:

Voice over weak with Mallu accent.




mallu athane kiki


Gaali:

Integrity ki I'm the boss ki link emanna undaa?




undi...but I hate to explain :-(
ela ante...actor gaadu supposed to finish one project proposal...but easy route kinda xyz company design copy cheddamnukuntaadu...he looks at one magazine...microsoft gurinchi untaadi...illegal practice ani...and then he gets motivated to do it....that point aadi attitude is "I am the boss"
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Esperanza:




baa ending integrity at all levels in an organization ani oka slide kottithini but explicit ga cheppatam anedi not right...if the film is not clear then thats a critic point...anduke aa slide ni kavalane remove chesa....the film should speak if not its a failure...explicit ga chebithe kick undadu...
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Naaistam:




Good job Maanasi. CLIPART--clap

Integrity ki I'm the boss ki link emanna undaa?

Nuvvu super ga unnav. :-) Mee office too much undi.

Voice over weak with Mallu accent.
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Naaistam:




Appaji aithe ending lo oka punch laga summarize chesi close maadi andariki asalu subject justification ento ardamavvali ga
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Peekavle_tokka:


MOVIEART--bemmi.sarle
Narsiah fans Ramu,Gali...
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malli soodu uzless...
integrity meeda thokka baa
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btw naakokka mukka kooda ardham kaaledu... intaki deni gurunchi adi... MOVIEART--headbang
Nobody can hurt me without my permission
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Naaistam:




last lo step yiragesaav gaa mansi gaa..!! chaala rojulaindabba ninnu choosi...
Nobody can hurt me without my permission
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yeyy voice over meedenaa..




kaadu manager gaadidi CLIPART--proud
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Godfather:

Rating depends on suitcase size..


MOVIEART--bemmi.sarasam
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pd annai eti seppado egjat ga adhe cheppavu esper baa kiki

1. music monotonous ga unna...other music add cheyakoodadu anedi naa view point endukante okate story scenario kada...maree masala lekka undakoodadu anedi kooda
2. agree lady weak...paapam aameku kooda telusu...maa andariki first time kada...so thanani naan ekkuva ibbandi pettalekapoyaanu...tamil pori general gaane acting raadu pillaki ;)
3. no dialogue film cheyyalanukunna...adi kooda intentional...black and white theme with no dialogues anedi naa movie pattern undaali anedi...future lo kooda any short films I make, idhe theme follow avvali anedi...just to be different from others


esper baa review sooper ichavu CLIPART--hug1
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Antha chusanu...Musical changes according to the situation okati....first lo Voice over strong ga undali....first lo chupinche some text about survey keep it another 5 secs longer if possible....inka Kinda text vastundi ani kuda teleedam ledu....lady character too weak undi....aa pilla cpoffee tagi vastanu ani cheppetappudu kuda edo banda buthulu tidtunattu expression ichindi so pls correct it ....inka aa iddaru characters vachaka dialogues valla chetha cheppiste better if it is allowed to do so.....Last lo message emi vellindo inko sari summarise chesi close cheste baguntadi.....otherwise rest is ok.
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Music monotonous aindi after 3 mins...try to give a diff feel at diff points with music changes....inka kinda vastunna text asalu vastunnattu kuda teleedam ledu do something about its visibility....inka lady character too weak appaaaaa
aa lady enter ayyaka let characters speak instead of sub Text.
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Naaistam:

eti soosav baa...glasses nenu ettukoledu...naan ee film ki director ni actor ni kaan



ok, inka sudaledu, opice lo vunna , evening chusta
Tarak....Mokshu....Kohli
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Appaji quickest comment entante

The righteous tarvata vache text chala quick ga teesesavu...enakamala vache voice over vastune undi kani text undadu......inka Venakamala vache oiceover chala feeble ga undi inka gattiga undala voice.

this is after the first 30 seconds.....other points will follow.
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Intiki poyaka review raastha..

Rating depends on suitcase size..
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Naaistam:




yeyy voice over meedenaa.. MOVIEART--banthi
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eti soosav baa...glasses nenu ettukoledu...naan ee film ki director ni actor ni kaan
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andulo jeans meeda tuck sesi glassess pettukunna uncle meerena MOVIEART--kummesana
I support #NTRdoNotcampaignforTDP trend in twitter.
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https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B24-R4X4pJbLNUJfLU9abTlMcmM/edit?usp=sharing

ya topic vachi integrity in a company... manollu chusi bavundante adho thuththiii...use ur gmail account...

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